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I'll never forget that one kiss in October
As your lips touched mine
It sent the tingles down my arms
My legs went weak
And it was your arms that held me high

I'll never forget that one kiss in October
My breath pulled out of my chest
Breathing in yours
You held my head
And showed me the way

I'll never forget that one kiss in October
You held me tight and lead the way
Making me long for you with pleasure
My back against the wall
And the world felt like mine

I'll never forget that one kiss in October
My very first
You were the one it was all for you
Ill never forget the years we had
The years I was away
But the thing that broke my heart
Was that I knew you felt the same

I'll never forget that one kiss in October
It was our first but not our last
That was one that tore me away
From my life back home
Only to you

I'll never forget that one kiss in October
We were young
But still in love
And every moment I was with you
I longed for that kiss
That very same one
The one like our first kiss in October

I hope you read this
And your heart is filled with shame
You were my first love
And my feelings will never be the same
I hope you remember
That you broke my heart
This is not what I wanted
The only thing I wanted
Was you

For the past three years
I’ve longed for your touch
But I'm ready to move on
Take new steps
And live the life that you have made me
The life when I’m not at your side
And you are not at mine

And as my eyes swell up with tears
All I can do is remember
That time I don’t regret
My two years
Where all I loved in this world was you
And in your heart know I won’t
Ever forget that one kiss in October
When you took my heart in your mouth
And made me feel as though you had it there forever
©2006-2009 ~lootz
:iconlootz:

Author's Comments

is having a competition that a poem had to start with "I'll never forget that one kiss in October" so i decided to write something new and ended up remenising about a past relationship. i didnt mean for it to happen but i like what i wrote so it doesnt matter

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:iconkululufreak:
Cool yule!!!!

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I was wrong about your art being bad, I entered this in a retarded kids art show- and it won 3rd place!!!
:iconelectrobaby:
This so lovely! Makes me go back to my own past relationships. Very good job! Glad to be able to enter this :D

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"Just 19 this sucker's dream
I guess I thought you had the flavour..."
--Special Needs, Placebo
:iconlootz:
thank you!!!!! :hug:

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visit me on my poetry name [link]
:iconelectrobaby:
You're welcoem! Twas my pleasure

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"Just 19 this sucker's dream
I guess I thought you had the flavour..."
--Special Needs, Placebo
:icondavespertine:
powerful stuff
i had forgotten how much
of our essence, our soul
can go into one kiss
and what it means
i guess it is possible to put your whole self into it
and not come out whole at the end of it
a dangerous thing
not to be taken lightly
no one wears their heart on their sleeve
but we do wipe our faces on our sleeves
after those long kisses
and lose our hearts sometimes
in the process

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in a capitalist society, morals are a competitive weakness
:iconrubik555:
i really like this on too, it is filled with so much emotion and make me think of one of my past relationships, not sure whether thats a good thing yet haha

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We will never die alone
Juggalos will carry on
Swing our hatchets if we must
each and every one of us!

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